I love it, but I think the Big Finale is missing. I mean something strong.
The intro is amazing, but the ending...
Let's do something mad at the end I think.
Not the Standard, but still great.
Ok. For a song by itself It is a good song to through in a playlist that is for backround at a party. The water at the beggining is kind of out of place, But at the smae time meaningful, That is if you look at this like a story. Over all This song is a nice piece of wook. However it doesn't fit with the other song you have created. But still Cudos.
Not bad, but not great either. Kind of below par for you, but seems to be what you were going for by the comments.
what the fuck are you talking about this is awesome
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