This is pretty fun sounding, particularly in the first half or so. You've put a lot of work into your percussion and there's some interesting ideas there. I'd love to hear what you could do if you based your song writing a little more around that. You could look into working more on structure since its a little meandering. Your leads also a little buried behind those drums in the mix. But overall it's quite energetic and lively with plenty of ideas going on.