I think I finally found the key! what could be missing may be...A stronger
percussion ! Thats what I think is missing from it :\
I agree with below
something is missing.. I can't put my finger on it either.. Maybe bells or a lil more sounds to establish a melody.. Add some piano in here and there.. I bet that would do it! but over all good song
dude not to hate..i like it..but there is something missing...i cant put my finger on it....but something is not there...like the core of the song is just not there..like ..hard to explain...but over all not a bad riff)..keep up the good work!