The progression you used really sucked, to be truthful.
The melody was very good, though. Really awesome melody, though you tried to do a secondary dominant at one point and it didn't work with the chords. You could make it work, but maybe have the chords sound before the melody note. The ending was a bit weird, too. Maybe you should have used a more consonant 7th chord?
The chords seem to suit this style of music, though the chords are really, really basic and simple, no other progession worked at the time when i composed it. I'll take on board what you've said, and i'll try to make the song better :)
Thanks for the comment,
Reminds me of canon in d in it's structure. :)
Glad you liked it :) and thanks for the comment!
I could envision this being used in some RPG, like during the end credits as the camera floats over scenes of the landscape or something like that.
You hit it bang on, i'm using it for Nyran Online. Either for opening, or a ending to something.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.