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Enhaze - Stay (WIP #2)

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hi, please give constructive feedback!!

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The intro is really cool and I love everything about it. But the build up is a little lackluster. The chords in the drop are too loud which is a bit jarring, it makes it sound very unbalanced. Turn them down a little that should work wonders. The small growl fills are cool, good job. Finish this with a better mix and youll have a BANGER.

AstroGalaxy responds:

Thanks so much for the review and feedback!!! I can't believe you made a review on this I'm really happy.

I'll take the feedback the best I can :)

Damn that's amazing. Sadly drop part wasn't this good

Hey, the ambience and atmosphere in the intro are really good. I listened to it until the end, and I had found some errors in the drop. I will suggest you use the same chords for the drop, but varied.

AstroGalaxy responds:

Thanks, I'll do that. I hate the drop and I feel like it's so messy because of the big chord change

Ok the starting ambience sounds really nice. However as already said, the drums feel a lil weak at 0:19 but raising the volume and some reeverb can fix that. Imo the buildup could have just a lil bit more volume because it feel wayyy to weak compared to the drop but don't overdo it so its more powerful than the drop. Apart from that, the saws threw me off... interesting sound I like it a lot! :) Finish this, I love it.

AstroGalaxy responds:

Thanks for the review! I just made the drums louder and made the percussion deeper and more reverbed and sounds a lot better than before. I've also fixed the volumes of the drop/buildup.

The drums that start at around 0:19 sound very weak, and that section could maybe use some kind of bassline to fill the low range.
The snare in the build up is also very weak imo, and I can barely hear the drums in the drop D:

Aside from that, I like the vocals a lot, and the track overall sounds very promising so far :)

AstroGalaxy responds:

Thanks for the review! I tried aiming for chillstep but I guess it didn't work out. I'll add some bass, so thanks for the tip. It's actually one of the flaws I just noticed in all of my music.

And as for drums, I tried making the drums gradually go louder in the buildup (I'll try to make them more intense), and I don't know why I don't hear drums in the drop too well either. I did a sidechain but it isn't working as I expected. I'll lower the volume of the chord stacks and see how it goes.

Anyways, thanks again, I will definitely take the feedback!

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3.80 / 5.00

Apr 17, 2021
3:34 PM EDT
File Info
1.7 MB
1 min 14 sec
  • Serum
  • 3x Osc
  • FL Studio 20

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