beginning reminds me of guitar vs. piano for some reason, great job on it
i thought so as well, but i tried to turn the song away from the same chorus and sounds as GVP. dont get me wrong though, GVP has inspired me to do a lot of my work! thank you for the review :)
I liked the timing of the drums quite a bit. The only thing is, though, they were a little weak. If you're planning on improving this song, add a few effects to your guitar and piano line so that they sound more graceful and not so mechanical. try to end it a little stronger, too; you start off with these rockin emotions, and then they just get tossed up in the air. in other words, try to end it with the guitar, using the piano as a sort of bridge to the final part. overall, this song was really unique. Keep it up! =)
Thanks, i was thinking the same thing but i didnt want to overload the song cause i thought i was doing good as it was. and usually in my songs i cut the song off at the end so i changed it to a softer piano. ill make a new version of it with a guitar ending and little stronger of drums. the thing is is that im not too good with effects n stuff so i might not change those. Overall, thank you for the review, you helped me out a lot.
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