:: Pros ::
The percussion sounded alright.
:: Cons ::
Piano is overly loud.
Random cut-off. (no outro)
Percussion too quiet.
This song is alright but the piano is way repetitive and loud. The kick drum should be the center of the track and I can barely hear it. Pump up the volume on the kick and bass. Not half bad, i'm going to guess you're pretty new to producing. Also get some VSTs like z3ta+ or Nexus.
Volume should be in order from greatest to least, arranged this way.
Cymbals/Pads/Snares/ whatever else around that range should be way lower than the rest.
You really want to emphasize the kick and bass in there to give it energy.