More cello is always nice. I wouldn’t think you took inspiration from my recent tracks in 3/4 to make a waltz? Just kidding, but I do really like the new changes you’ve made to your profile picture. It made me laugh when I read “tangeroni and cheese”. I will advise to be extremely careful when implementing vocals, as at least from what I’ve seen, they (as in samples) can be very inconsistent between softwares and good ones appear to be hard to find. With regard to the outro, I’ve suddenly realized with the release of Mississippi that outros are really hard with weird tracks. Hence I can empathize with the temptation to just end with a simple quick chord, as I just did it as well. I don’t think that’s the best way to end a piece however, as it can leave the listener feeling a little dissatisfied. But who cares? It’s a waltz with a purposefully uncatchy melody, which paradoxically makes it catchy.
Edit: I must have been high or something when I wrote this review. This melody is veeeeery questionable and almost gives me a headache listening to it. Allow me to adjust the stars accordingly. But I do kinda like 1:36 so at least there’s that.