Good
You said you redid it, but I dont know how much you remixed, so I might not be able to grade fairly....From what I heard: It sounded a little dry, as in not enough action, in some places, it was a little repitive and the drums weren't complex enough. However, the ts04ish sound was pretty cool and the change in stringsand little filter type thing was a nice touch in the middle. Good Work
IonBlaster 
