hard and heavy
nice vocals, I am not a metal fan....but what you could do is make it sound like its an am channel with like 16kbps and then increase it over like 20 seconds as an effect in the beginning, and then in the end you can return it to being low quality ending with a simple guitar solo. I think everything in the middle is very tasteful, but put more lyrics people like hearing vocals <@;-)
Hmm... need to tweak volume.
You need to boost the volume on the entire song. After boosting the volume... yeah, I can hear better now. At first, I thought everything sounded thin.
One thing though... there's a lack of energy in this recording. I didn't feel pumped up. Tweak the bass EQ of the song to give it more weight. It sounds a bit thin, methinks. Also try adding delay or reverb on the vocals (but I have to admit that, without effects, the vocals are good -- better than mine, hehe).
Hope this helps improve your track. Keep it up!
I'll keep that in mind on our next ep.
There's gonna be a new song put up tomorrow.
*Grumbleson about only having 2 submissions a day*