It turned out horrible straight

Regular is where it will be on my playlist

your bass rythem is a tad overdone. Its not loud, but distorted within the make. Maybe tone down the main, then its boss as tits. Once again great work man!

It was just alright

Not really a track ,but a nice beat! something hommies would listen to in a pimped up hydrolic car. Going up and down. It does sound more techno than hip-hop though. I did like the vocals, but I think the main beat is just a bit too loud, you know, that electronic sound. I don't know what it's called, but it does seem to interfeer with the rest of the ensamble.

Keep going though, never give up! :D