mixed some harcore kicks with some reggeaton things :P this is how it turned out.
Notbad
Well this was notbad, I could see you adding more of a vocal to this like a song of sorts with vocals. theres a number of things you could do, but adding much more variaty is needed and really changing up some of the sounds would just be a plus on your end.
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I could see you adding more of a vocal to this like a song of sorts with vocals. and more variaty of the different sounds and this was a tad short.
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Not bad...but the UH and Aw is too dominating
The Uh and Aw might be better as a bass background and maybe ad some vocals? or not. either way it's creative but just a tad repeative.
yeah ;) I know it's repetive, I'll definitly work on that on my songs. I only have the demo version of fruity loops and I can't save my projects as fl file so I have to make all my songs in 1 sitting, so I don't really have a lot of chance to make a really big song or add a lot of diffrent stuff. When I get the real FL studio i'm going to work on that for sure.
Hehe
Getting creative! Started out as just a normal track with nice beat and rythem. Adding the "Uh" and "Aw" was a great addition, hehe. Still is a bit repetetive, but an intresting listen. Keep up the good work!
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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
WrenchNinja 
