Cool track

This almost sounds a bit techno and such, but you marked it as something else it does have a cool vibe something like at a dance club but on a lighter note, this was just way too "SHORT" for sure make it longer ad some more notes some more sounds etc. But a good track regardless

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
for sure make it longer ad some more notes some more sounds etc.

~X~

Ok...

I didn't really think it was slow enough for a day int he park song though, it's more like a day in the city or something. Either way, good song, just the title that doesn't fit in. Keep up the good work!

-cd-