Ah, never mind.
You can't please 'em all Onestar. True, a little elaboration on why he thought it was boring would have helped, but it's not worth getting riled about.
Personally I thought it was the complete opposite of boring. Another one of your great, formless, seemingly improvised things. Love the way it builds up towards the end. It's slow getting there, but when it does, it's worth it.
I have nothing else to say.
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