um ok

Well I must say while there are some stuff in here you can work with alot of this was scratchy and hard to enjoy but I think if you worked on it a little bit more put some quality and just mainstreamed it it would be a lot better then it is, but its a start atleast.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more quality and make it much longer with more mix and variaty.

~X~

Ooookaay....

The beginning breaks my ears, but after that's its not so bad. But make it longer, for god's sake.

Heh

I like it! This is by far the most stylish tracks of the ones you've submitted so far. :) I love the progression at the beginning, sounds awesome. keep up the great work!

-cd-