Hey man. Yea... there are some gaps in it. Not saying that you're bad at this or anything, because it's pretty good, but it would be twice as good if there weren't any gaps in the song.
you know, i didn't notice the gaps untill the person below told me and then you did.
haha. I sound like some dumb person.
So thanks for telling me. Ill have to listen to it next time alittle better haha.
Not bad, my friend. But, there is a lot of inconsistency going on within the song. It sounds like you tried to layout your song in a program like Audacity and didn't quite pair it all up. There are time gaps that need to be filled in order to make the song smoother to listen to. I'm not sure if that was what you wanted in your song, but its very distracting, like that synth that enters around 2:08. Keep it up though, you're getting there!
I mean i don't think i am that bad at it but it's not like i do it to be pro. Just for fun i guess.
Ill try to put your advise in the songs