yup, it rocks
It was allright.
The guitar melody and harmony sounded ok, but I think you should stay away from having drum hits on every 8th note. It takes away from the quality. Also t'wards the end, there are a few conflicting notes that keep going through it. Back to the drums, maybe use a less ear-abusive drum with a little mor complexity in the beat. It also helps if you have a clear bass drum and snare.
WHAT.WAS.THAT. SCALE!?!?!? im a guitarist so i NEED to know because that was F*CKING AWESOME!
A decent effort..
However, I'm sad to say that it's a little..awkward. But i have to commend you, it is would be impressive, were it not for the sub-standard instruments (slayers are that, when unmanaged). I'd also like to point out that the Flanger near the end made my ears sore. But send me an email sometime. You've clearly got talent for creating original works.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.