this song is missing 2 things
1 a soft clipper to keep the high frequencies down a little bit and to keep them from deafening
and 2. a sold synth bass line or something to add more texture and flavor to those trippy squeakies at the beginning.
also you could do well to remove the clap altogether and start fresh witht that its annoyin and breaks the mood of the song.
other than that this song actually tripped me out meaning this song is officially better than almost every other song on the top of the trance listings. That says a lot you have good ideas man.
keep writing i want to see how your music evolves
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Its good but yeah everything was said already not much advice i can give you
lol true, check out version 2 if you havent already and let me know if u think its better? thanks for reviewing
The high frequencies as the ppl before me said were a little deafening when played very loudly, and those claps...well just get rid of them. overall great song tho!
thanks man, i think i cleaned most of that up in version 2 but glad to get feedback
the dude bfore me said pretty much everything...
..but I'll add that the high pitch sounds at the begining could've been an intro, not the whole song, it gets pretty repetitive and since it's high tone, like Godknown said, it gets deafening. good work!^^
yeah i fixed it up and made it more technoey lol in version 2.0
thanks for the review
It sounds good, and a little experimental. The beat in the background was pretty good, but those loud clanging and clapping noises kind of disrupt the peace in the song. You could turn them down and pan them so they aren't directly in the audience's face. However, that bright and quick synth you chose is very mesmerizing to say the least. I love that part of the song. Except, if you want, you could tone down the high frequencies on it a little bit, because when loud, its almost deafening, ha ha. Anyways, keep up the excellent work!
thanks for the review, yeah i still haven't edited the song yet but i finished the rough copy and was like wait does this sound any good at all? so i put it up lol.....
thanks for the input ill see what i can do, might not be till tomrrow though
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