I felt like you aren't really trying. You just wanted something on newgrounds so you can say to friends, "Hey, I have stuff on newgrounds!" Listening to it, I think that a lot of people are gonna claim that "you suck at life" or some other stuff like that. If that was your aim, mission accomplished. If not, try to make music sound a little more appealing.
i almost feel compelled to write a review
i honestly dont know what to say say. if im not looking at the track bar, i find myself wanting the song to end, because it just keeps going, and the more i listen, it makes me laugh at how ridiculous it is. But thats the best part in way, but it isnt. its annoying as hell, but i keep listening. which is why i think you did a good job.
that was... unpleaseant... sorry but i'm sure you know it too.... D:
Hahaha, this is a very funny response, it's supposed to be unpleasant.