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[W] Motion [Full]

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Yep the not so crappy version of Motion. Review plz so i can improve :D <3

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Not bad.

The melody's decent, there's room for improvement. Also, you should try making more than 1 melody/ The major problems are the instruments you chose, specially the bass. Sounds too distorted and plain, should make it deeper with some effects. The instruments you used for the beats were ugly too. You could make this song better by fixing all those things, keep it up ;D

Mind checking out a WIP I just released? It's called ".:Wherever She Is WIP:."

nice :) but one thing

i liked it! but one thing i didnt like where the tones of the second instrument , they didn't fit in the rest tones , it was false but for the rest good joB!

weemeee responds:

lol ok Ty for ur review

Btw: r u nl?

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Uploaded
Oct 16, 2007
10:51 AM EDT
Genre
Techno
File Info
Song
2.4 MB
2 min 37 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.