This is madness!

Wow that was... interesting. :) Haven't come across something quite alike. You are pulled into the song by the beautiful melody and yanked out by the unpleasant pause. My rating? Hmmm... 10/10 for originality!

Fitting title btw.

well

theres potential here ,and i know your thinking crap a lecture but here me out, the whole intresting melody thing is a good idea but you need to give it structer and where the song changes to a dif part you can really tell so work on that to but i hope you come out with a fixed version.