Pre-emptive Strike

Hmm....... kinda reminds me of Bone Thugs in Harmony. The gunshot sounds horrible. Sounds like bubble wrap. Get that fixed. And try to turn down the whole "I'm a gangter" thing you have going in the lyrics. Good track though. Gets a 4.

ELEVENT responds:

Hmm if you listen to the lyrics it's talking AGAINST rap that glorifies the whole "G" lifestyle. I mention a few times that I'm not a thug and will never be a ganster rapper.

Godknown

2007-10-14 04:43:28

Good work.

The rap is what makes this. It almost sounds like a norte rap.

TheEyeOfMusiK

2007-10-14 03:13:00

BRAVO!!!

for ur first time bruh? thats impressive.

my first hip hop song SUCKED ASS. this is very impressive, your rapping is sik too. keep it up bruh, i got my eye on u.

-RMP

XenoxX

2007-10-14 02:57:02

Awesomeness

This Is a Hot Track

XenoxX

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ELEVENT

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Listens: 815
Downloads: 94
Votes: 6
Score: 4.21 / 5.00

Uploaded: Oct 14, 2007; 2:53 AM EDT
File Info: Song; 4.5 MB; 4 min 56 sec

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