sounds like a musical clock yay
Kinda a slow song, but I mean that in a good way ya know. It was pretty awesome. I liked it lots and stuff.
When I listen to songs I get in them. In this one I felt like i was in a sand shifter in a large factory. Your right this did have a slow start but that was okay I figure you were trying to convey a certain enviroment instead of feeling. Sad to say the warm up was the best part. The middle was wet but shallow wet and it didn't have nearly enough power. I don't know if your new to this or not but industrial has a harder hit and a heavy industry sound. You have one of two. I'm sure you'll get better at this eventually and I hope to hear some heavy, raw and hardcore next time I see your name in the Industry @)
Thats where I have most of my problems, I can get a really good beginning to a song, but it trails off to the end, I definitely need to work on it.
Thanks for the review.
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