beautiful
this really set a serene and thoughtful atmosphere... regret and all those emotions come into play. you did great. sorry to hear u broke up, must be tough ;[
i think that you could have improved it by making the vocals a tad louder and serve a greater use throughout the song rahter than that short break in the beat.
the sfx throughout the entire thing were awesome. all of those droplet sounds and scratched up sounds were subtle details but made the piece stand out.
finally, i wish it was longer. i liked the beachy theme at the beginning and that could have been expanded on, the emotions came in strong but ended too abruptly, i wish i could meditate on this song longer.
Overall, great job, and hope u feel better by now. :)