Keep practicing.

It needs a lot more work. Not just on it's length, but also on making the music match itself. The autobots thing doesn't match up, and neither do the "boing" noises. Take a little more time before posting.

very wierd gerard

gerard how come its like "autobots go out!
wierd

Gerardo ur gay

dis song iz pobably laim since Dee onli gaiv it a 5 ur. Oh and u shood remember to put some effort into survival

its good for a first

ok i know this is ur song gerard its pretty ordinary considering that u r using all default sounds/ loops. did u make that drum loop yourself or did u use the default drumsyth loops. one thing i should tell u is that ur not allowed to use default sounds on the newgrounds audio portal. try using the piano roll for ur loops. and try out FL keys coz its just pure piano

i love it it rulez and its 10 outa 10

wohooo you rule keep on doing this stuff