Different

So here was a good beat with some hard sounds and very fast, I think you should have a mix of both soft and hard and build ups to make it more of a complete feel, so thats one idea to think about, and wouldnt hurt to try it out, so go try it out and see the results shine.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think you should have a mix of both soft and hard and build ups to make it more of a complete feel.

~X~

its like a nuclear bomb on speed

it was fun while it lasted, make a 3 minute song with this it would pepole woulde get epileptic outbursts all the time and i would personally enjoy that. but slow down anyway dude my ears are vibrate but that can be a good thing but not in my case.
shiney man, good one

THIS IS MADNESS!!!

This sounds like a song from Madness Combat

great work!!

this is great and i would love to hear like a full version with voice dubs or something!

pretty

uhh...
too much high!