Very nice beat

And this one just kicks off with a very welldone beat and while it doesnt build up on anything you have a steady flow of nice tempo and such, and I have to say overall its a nice piece it could be longer though as it was very short, anyways nice work on this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer and ad some build up points and wouldnt hurt to have some build down points aswell.

~X~

good, very good

a bit loud though, but it was very impressive for only your second submission!

Very nicely done ;)

I'm a big fan of that Mario castle remix you put out a while ago, so I decided to check out your other music and ended up starting here. To begin, I like how it loops. That could be very useful to some people :D

The song isn't TOO repetetive, but it IS short, and thus I must say that after listening to it the equivalent of a 4-5 minute fully fledged song results in it getting a tad annoying. The beat was nice, the melody was great, just needs to be longer and, y'know, less loop-etetive :p

Could use more work...

Like JakBaronKing said, it is a tad too repetitive and could use more variation.Although this is your first try at breakbeat you should try to get better at it.You will make better breakbeat music :D

w00t

Get down 'n up babah yeah!

5/5
10/10