Way to repetitive

Way to repetitive, long, same beat over and over.. no change.. and the click sound at parts is bloody annoying, I'd have to say scrap this one... which is unfortunate, I like your other work far more.

Hmm...

Up until 00:32 it just holds down two beats...

00:44 you bring in more than the beats then what you had originally.

From what I hear you are able to bring in a nice enough introduction, but I have to wonder if Techno is really your style. You seem (from what I hear) a Drum and Bass type of person, I dunno...I am probably wrong here.

It is a fairly clear, easy to listen to song (at the the 2:08) mark. But it just drowns in its own length. 02:35 you bring in extra drums...I think that that could have been done earlier rather then later. It is not bad at all, I just think that perhaps more variation in the overall melody of the piece and a cut on the length would more this song up a few more points ^^.

Its your choice to take my advice...and if you want any other advice on anything else (work on the ending here...it just kinda...ends abruptly...though it still sounded good o.o.) just contact either via PM, or at mr.alphaducky@hotmail.com, and don't worry I won't be stealing any of your work ;]...I think XD.

Decent, could be better...,
-AJ-

Awesome

Well i decided to review both of these songs...Awesome work on this one. Sounds really cool.

Cool

Sweet, I like this, Techno Party time

Ace-57