Submitted in 2007?
Oh well, I promised....
I'll keep it short, since you've probably improved your musical abilities in the last 4 years.
First, hopefully you've found some way to record a live guitar or found a more convincing VST plugin.
Second, Hopefully you've gotten better a variation, which is very lacking in this track. However, I must say that I enjoy the chord progression. It's one that I don't hear every day.