The paragonX9 comment below definitely hits home. Definitely has that energy and composition style but obviously this is uniquely your own. Melodically a masterpiece and I love the progression of the chords/melodies.

My only critique personally is I found the mix a bit dull, compressing your high end too much on the master or something? Doesn't need to be raspy but definitely needs to be boosted for future reference.

The other comment regarding the hats being too busy, I don't agree. I think the hats are the best part of the drum track.

Purely as the only thing I can add in terms of constructive criticism, maybe the drums/hats are a bit 'busy' or intense(?) in some parts and fight for room with the complex melodies and synth/key sounds. But that's purely personal opinion, and the only 'improvement' I could make or suggest.

Again, lots of interesting ideas, a much more structured song than anything I'm capable of making, and I'm interested to hear more!

For some reason, drop reminded me paragonX9. Great job :D