I wish you did more songs and normal music like this.
You got a potential here. It's unconventional, radical and slightly
dark. But not in an off-putting way that will distance your listeners.
You could do wonders if you combined your edgy but quirky
lyrics with ambivalent sweeping pads and dark SFXs.
It would be a great combo of mainstream and radical styles.
We need more artists like you......IF you make more like this :D