a story of morality for the kids
Decent
A decent tune you have here and I like the "VOICES" that you ad along with this it really makes for something more interesting then most so nice addition in making more then just the normal you really bring a lot here to the audio format
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Needs to be much longer you have a good style here but just needs to be much longer.
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Sweet
Great stuff! Creative way to tell a story, love the music, and the tale is an interesting twist to things. Keep it up!
-cd-
nice
I liked it. I hope that you make more of this. 5/5
Shatner is better than you are
Only William Shatner can pull this out of his you know what.....I mean c'mon story/poetry and music?!!! That's for no talent hacks *cough*Shatner*cough*
Your snide use of coughing through text isn't clever and your limited generalizations about what music should be aren't impressing anyone. You don't have to like my music.
I think you can make this more appealing
Your story is good...but I think the music is a bit wack. The concept may be to complicated for young kids...Good job though I got it!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
LordZedd 
