Her right leg looks a bit crooked to me for some reason. I do like her hair and glasses though.

I think this looks fine as it is though. Kind of thinking she might just be having a rough or lonely day and reading a book to get away from her problems for awhile.

The background honestly is not that bad, maybe a few more lines to show how hard it might be raining outside though.

Overall, pretty good piece, hope to keep seeing more good art in the future.

The final product is still fine though.