Somehow, the long first in this picture doesn't seem very powerful, maybe it has somthing to do with the thin-limb style of drawing. Nice work on color and texture though, the sketchy style of shading with red and blue works well. As for the first itself, I feel it could have been a bit more effectful. Looks kind of like a squid... or something. :) Keep it going!
I see it now. I should change the name of this piece to the fragile squid fist haha.
Thanks for the feedback
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