The idea ain't bad, but this one feels a bit too rough and the mob's really small. I really like the blaze rods and the effect, but the face feels like a 2D image drawn crudely, refine the expression, make it OFF THE WALL intense. Since the idea for the face seems cool, it just needs to be more refined. Also don't drop all your art in one day, drop it once a day so that you're not "dropping a bomb" of work and then having nothing for ages. Will help with your visibility.