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Paris Dawn


Author Comments

One of my pair arts, the other is set in dusk.


You did a good job at portraying that warm morning feel. You've really seem to have captured the elegance of Paris even in just a small frame.. Just a few minor recommendations on this- the clouds need to have just a bit more white on the shadow sides away from the sun, a slight further enhancement of her hair highlights and shadows. I also think that a bit of neck jewelry- even if it's just a small pendent- would enhance the quality of this work, adding a bit more fashion.

NIce! I like this one! :)

Try to keep the dimensions to where they fit within the screen, or pretty close. It's nice to have the ability to get a closer look, but you want it to be a closer look with a magnifier, not a microscope. This one isn't horribly bad, but when I bring it to full size, I only get a screen full of the tower. That's a wee bit close.

It's a common situation. Many people submit large to overly-large dimensions. I adjusted mine to just lower than my screen's dimensions so that it was visible, but nothing was off-screen.

I saw one where the guy submitted a piece that was over 8000 pix wide. It was so large it not only couldn't be seen, but it slowed the computer when trying to scroll around. x)

I like this one. She's cute, and this is well done. I look forward to seeing more from you. :)

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Zcheio responds:

This is really really helpful :) Thank you for the suggestions!

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5.00 / 5.00

Jul 18, 2013
10:29 PM EDT
File Info
768 x 817 px
479.4 KB

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