A lot of effort went into this...
...however, the robot is off perspective. On the other hand, I like how you did the design. Make sure that your part matches the construction of the other person next time.
im just giveing you advice dont get mad i cant draw worth shit, but it could use improvement
I'm not going to get mad if you're going to be more specific.
Sure, knowing that it could be better is useful information in itself, but on the other hand, it would be more interesting to know exactly WHAT to improve on.
If your advice concerns anything other than the robot and the thing he's holding (as well as the close-up on the head to the right, well, that wasn't my part of the work.
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