Beautifully done artwork, and a nice poem to match. Starting the end verse with "in other words," though, does slightly break from the pattern of offering and description, and generally is a form which can detract from a works continuity, so it may be best to drop it and leace the line just as "May the art take you on your journey."
Thank you very much ^_^ , thanks for the advice , for if I do add a poem to my new works in the future. ^_^
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