If showing despair and death was the intent here, tidbits of the 'horror' throughout her would have been better. If this is a continuity of the non horror version, then a full-blown horror face would have been better here to better show the contrast and amplify the horror. The swords could also have benefited from more detail and realism or just from a subtler way of presenting it, such as embedding them into her instead of making them float above her. If you were going for realism with the right side burning faster than the left side, it would be totally wrong as the fire appears to symmetrically encircle her. After reading the review below me I must admit the pupillary distance makes her look like a frog, which has nothing to do with the off-looking right orbit.