Pretty good! Btw I'm sure you know this, but in case you don't, Zelda and Shiek are the same person btw. Nice work though.
I give you a four star for having a good eye for anatomy and nice coloring. I think you should try and make the characters more flexible. They look a little stiff in the face as if they can't turn, or something like that, but other than that, great job. You're better than me as far as anatomy. I'm still studying on how certain parts of the body look in different poses.
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