She looks a little too thick to me. I don't know who the characters is, nor do I care. I don't like how you have your light sourced scattered about. That really bothers me. You've got a lot of potential here, but it is wasted because it looks like you didn't really...put much effort into it. I would really start exaggerating your proportions a little more, and work on that anatomy. The shading is good, but it's nothing to write home about. It could definitely use some improvement. What I would do is take a hard brush, not a soft one, and lower the opacity. Go with the default gray, and make it one of the lighter ones while your shading layer is in "Multiply" and make one large stroke, covering a large amount of area, and then make tinier strokes and blend it all together using the smudge tool, which by the way should be set at around 15-25%.
Good luck in your future endeavors. ;)
out of all the custom design characters in SC4 Ashlotte was my personal favorite beacuse she was design by my favorite Manga Artist Oh!Great you did capture her likeness very well its very clean drawing and i like how the colors dont blend into the background my only complaint is that you didnt include the red ribbon bow or at least part of it other than that its a nice piece nice work