Haha, nice! I liked it.
The sparkly flesh exposed flesh really makes this a zombie for a younger girl generation. I could see this adorning a 12 year old girl's wall right next to the Hello Kitty poster. I think the characters depicted could be branched out into a very interesting mini series...
As far as the design elements, I actually kind of like this, despite hating both zombies and anime art. Your proportions are pretty nice, and the flesh eaten effects on the faces and such are well done without being too gory. I think I would have made the character on the left's hair a different color from the exposed flesh though.
Aww...Pretty young zombie girls.