i like how you shade. Nice clean lines for shadow. I also like how the lines that make up the shadow point to the light source.
the only thing I don't like is how some parts of the wings are messy.
yeah, the wings are a bit off: now that i'm currently working on a piece involving wings i understand they're all wrong. however thank you, i was experimenting a comic style i never had the pleasure to try.
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