She's adorable, though I strongly believe that a character sheet should include the entirety of the character instead of just to her waist. I think that a character sheet should be thought of as a means of reference if you ever decide to get her drawn by a different artist. Going only down to the waist makes them think "Well what do I do now?" and almost completely defeats the purpose.
I also think some shading should be in order as well, but some people don't do shading on their sheets, so I will not hold that against you. :P
Still though, I believe that conveying what she is in terms of status is shown just fine. You can tell that she's a sweet school girl; at least on the outside. The text is easy to read, too.
You're heading in the right direction. Just push yourself a little harder. :P
Thank you for the constructive criticism. I agree completely with your advice but the things left out are things I am trying to learn. I can do a little shading but I'm terrible and I tend to do half bodies because I am horrible with below the waist. All in due practice though. :D
Cool looking character, I assume she Is a schoolgirl. Its a shame that you didn't upload this to NG on her birthday though.
Thank you, yes she is and I know I did it on purpose. ^.^
Yesterday is the day I created the character so that technically is her birthday(well it doesn't have to be.)
plus I didn't finish the picture till today so yea. :P
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