This is actually pretty bad and I felt like it'd be good to leave it as it is to show people why.
Now if you look up close it might look good and all that but its the thumbnail that matters the most.
When you look at it zoomed out or from afar the entire picture looks muddy and all over the place, there are no clear forms indicated with the use of lighting.
My mistake here was having the same contrast differences for every surface causing the entire picture to look like a big splash of ink.