You should draw more, like her body :s
It seems as though the brightness of this picture would be deterring; however, it actually provides an interesting aesthetic. I really like how subtle the freckles are. The only criticism I have is that the chin should probably be facing up if the nose is in that kind of a position (i.e. up). It may be, however, that that was just the style of nose you felt like drawing. In any case, I really like what you've done. The ethereal swirling hair reminds me of flaaffly or some other strange cloud-like Pokemon.
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