Mass Effect 1 - Wrex. Shepard. Mass Effect 2 - Grunt. Shepard. IT'S NOT THE SAME!
Only suggestion is that yes, he is too thin. You could literally just go into photoshop and squish him, then all the proportions would be correct!
Not bad, but he's a bit too thin.
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