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Art by Will Hobden (me)
Story by Kei Alfonso


nice picture m8!

very nice monster might need a little work! but thumbs up other wise!

Willpinoy responds:

whats wrong with the monster?


Hey nice job man, I like how it's all colored in shades of gray to kind of add to the creepiness. (or maybe you just wanted that manga-esque style, i dunno) But I think the thing you did best was definitely portraying a sense of motion. You did an excellent job at portraying that energy in every panel, the only problem with motion that I saw was in the left panel, second row, the monster probably could've been leaning in a little more I think. And the hand of the monster in the first row, right panel seemed a little off to me too. But other than those tiny details, great work man! Keep it up!

Wery nice!

It looks wery nice, I don't know if it was your intention to make the skull, appear like it mad of matel then organic material. It looks a little like that when the hand goes through the head.

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Willpinoy responds:

It does? well,i didnt really intend on making it look like metal. They're just clumps of flesh

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Credits & Info

3.88 / 5.00

Mar 21, 2010 | 6:49 AM EDT
File Info
1414 x 2000 px
1.2 mb

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