i really love how you did the progression in this and the art style hits me right in my nostalgia, great work

Really nice visuals

This was nice and i really like the visuals in art here and it is like a comic, and really love how you give this some suspense and emotion in each frame, onething i thought could be better though was that the frames are too close together, the linework and shading cameout well and also has a dark feel and touch to it that was all pretty good, now as an idea for improving, spread out the frames some maybe even put some bars in bewtween, kinda like sunday comics of sorts, but anyways good comic here hope to see more soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Spread out the frames abit more so its not all so bunched up, other then that it was pretty good.

Quite interesting

I really tfelt that this was a daring image. It's when you are trying to represent something that doesn't seem to fit in with everything else. You show these random images that are quite incomprehensible. What's funny is how you show so many good angles in this. I have been reviewing a lot of weird things lately, but this is easily the most artistic. I think the strongest point is how you get the detail of the lines down.

You can just see strong lines all over this Jamaican character, if it's even the same guy. It shows off a wide variety of shots that detail a gritty world. The title reminds me of the artwork by people like Alan Moore. It really makes you get into this character's mind, whatever kind of mind that may be. You're a good artist.

Great¡¡¡¡¡

Continue like this, excellent drawing...

Exellent

The drawings and coloring echnique are amazing !