I like it, but I would of suggested messing around with the text so it works better with the overall piece. Bringing back the color so that it's a softer hue, blending it in more by fading it a tad, roughing up the edges so it shows wear on it, maybe a bit of stylizing so that way the text isn't too harsh on the eyes and fits with the composition. Other than that, good job.
Me neither but it had to be visible on the miniature. Thanks!